Please provide feedback for my article

  1. marcuscaine profile image94
    marcuscaineposted 8 weeks ago

    Please provide feedback for my article:
    https://hubpages.com/religion-philosoph … ch-history

    Thank you

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image95
    Jeremy Gillposted 8 weeks ago

    Good read, I've only got nitpicks as suggestions.

    1) There's one or too tiny errors, like a misplaced comma here: " ...led by a merchant ,Marwan Sabrisa,"
    2) Caption your photos rather than use a capsule title for them.
    3) I've been told we're not supposed to title capsules "Conclusion". I know it's tempting, as it gives us an easy way to wrap things up, but see if you can find another name.

 
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