Feedback of my content

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   Maikel Helenposted 7 years ago

   Hi, I published my content a couple of time but not approving here.
   So I wanna have the feedback on my content.https://hubpages.com/business/Contract-Management-Software-sotution

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   Kierstin Gunsbergposted 7 years ago

   To pass the quality standards on HubPages you need to show that you have a strong grasp on the English language and English grammar. This article doesn't read that way. It's readable, but there are nuances that make it difficult to read. Also, subject matter here on HP is really important. You should focus on writing about things that readers are looking for. Readers aren't looking for the benefits of contract management. But readers might be looking for how to use a particular contract management program. That would be a better, more useful article.
   
   Otherwise this just seems like an ad for the business linked in the article.

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      Maikel Helenposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks a lot for your cooperation!

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   theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   I took a look at your anti-aging hub and there are several problems with it too. As well as many grammatical errors, you link to another article written by you, which in turn is promoting your website - and it seems you are writing under two different names. It all looks a bit suspicious, circular, and self-promoting. Those days of promoting by creating artificial backlinks have gone. You are either here to write good quality content, or you are not. In which case, you may as well give up because self-promotion is frowned on.
   
   "In today’s episode, you’re going to have an amazing content on anti-aging tips. So let’s jump over that!"
   
   * You are writing a standalone article, not a TV script. There's no 'episode'.
   * Let your reader be the judge whether the content is 'amazing'. Telling people how to eat carrots, is not 'amazing' unless you have a completely new idea.
   * 'Jump over' what?
   
   If you want to write at Hubpages and be successful here, you need to do a little research:
   
   http://hubpages.com/faq/
   http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents
   
   You have a a nice friendly writing style, but you need to dial it back a little. I'm sure with some research and understanding about what is required, you could do well here.

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      Maikel Helenposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your clarification!

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