I'd like feedback on my article: Indian Rebellion of 1857- The First War Of...

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   Suleman3posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Indian Rebellion of 1857- The First War Of Independence. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      You can't copy from Wikipedia (or anywhere). All writing should be your own original work.
      
      https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/India … on_of_1857

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   Suleman3posted 5 years ago

   I didn't copy from wikipedia but take help from my notes

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      Marketing Meritposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Your article:The immediate event which angered the sepoys was about the ammunition for the new rifles they had to use. The cartridges that were used in the rifles had to be bitten open. The Muslims were angry because they thought that the paper cartridges had pig fat in them. This was because Muslims believe that pigs are unclean. Hindu soldiers were angry because they believed the cartridges had cow fat in them and cow is their religious figure.
      
      Wikipedia:The immediate event which angered the sepoys was about the ammunition for the new rifles they had to use. The cartridges that were used in the rifles had to be bitten open. The Muslims were angry because they thought that the paper cartridges had pig fat in them. This was because Muslims believe that pigs are unclean. Hindu soldiers were angry because they believed the cartridges had cow fat in them.
      
      Look the same to me!

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      Marketing Meritposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Also noticed large chunks copied from this assignment here:
      https://www.scribd.com/document/1880296 … ent-7-shah
      and
      http://mynotesliterature.blogspot.com/2 … -1857.html
      
      Your article: Although the whole Indian nation faced resentment against the British but the aims were different. The Muslim wanted to regain control and again set up the Mughal Empire. There was no general plan or a Leader. The princes did not want the Imperial power once again. There was no sense of patriotism and India was too dived for such a feeling. The only uniting force was Islam but the other groups opposed them which were Hindus and Sikhs as they did not want the rule of Muslim once again on the India. These were the reasons as British considered this as “Muslim Revolt”.
      
      SCRIBD: Although the whole Indian nation faced resentment against the British but the aims were different. The Muslim wanted to regain control and again set up the Mughal Empire. There was no general plan or a Leader. The princes did not want the Imperial power once again. There was no sense of patriotism and India was too dived for such a feeling. The only uniting force was Islam but the other groups opposed them which were Hindus and Sikhs as they did not want the rule of Muslim once again on the India. These were the reasons as British considered this as “Muslim Revolt”.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 5 years ago

   Ooooh....BUSTED!

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   Suleman3posted 5 years ago

   Yes I copied few lines but now I have edit it.

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      DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Although the whole Indian nation faced resentment against the British but the aims were different. The Muslim wanted to regain control and again set up the Mughal Empire. There was no general plan or a Leader. The princes did not want the Imperial power once again. There was no sense of patriotism and India was too dived for such a feeling. The only uniting force was Islam but the other groups opposed them which were Hindus and Sikhs as they did not want the rule of Muslim once again on the India. These were the reasons as British considered this as “Muslim Revolt”.
      
      A few lines?

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   A "few lines?" Must be a different definition of few in Pakistan than where I come from.

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   Suleman3posted 5 years ago

   Ok thanks everyone for helping me.

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