I'd like feedback on my article: How is ransomware a threat to cloud storage...

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   communicationsqposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? I previously shared a post but somehow the link was not working there. Thanks!
   Here is my article: How is ransomware a threat to cloud storage system or cloud computing in general (must be signed in to view)

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      CYong74posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi,
      
      There are several issues with this hub.
      
      1) Headers must be written in the APA title case style. This is the first thing editors look out for.
      2) Separate your paragraphs. Currently, there are huge chunks of text in your hub which is a put-off.
      3) Your language is awkward overall, forgive me for saying. Other than typos here and there, your individual sentences do not flow/connect, making the text unappealing to read. There are also nonsensical sentences such as: "Now the cyber-criminals oppose a new threat which is on the rise since the last ..."  (oppose a new threat? That makes them our allies)

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         communicationsqposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Trust me that's of great help. I would go through my article and restructure it from scratch. Thank you so much for your comment.

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   DrMark1961posted 6 years ago

   Change the title. It is way too long. No one is going to click on that even if they are interested in the subject. (It also needs to be in the APA style as was explained by CYong.)
   If someone does click on the title, and goes to your article, that first paragraph is going to be enough to make them bounce out to find something else. It does not say anything new and does not get down to the subject matter. If a reader does not stay on your article and actually read, you will have a page view but will not have an impression so will not be paid.
   "Cyber criminals then communication with us" is an example of grammar that needs to be improved. This is difficult to read. Read it out loud or have someone else read it before making your final submission.
   The problem with the long paragraphs have already been mentioned. You need to alter the layout.
   This is interesting subject matter but still needs a lot of work. It needs to be written in an original manner that will attract readers. Good luck with this.

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      communicationsqposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you DrMark for elaborating it. Much appreciated.

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         theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         I'd stake my next meal on the three facts that 1. Your name is not Judy. 2. That's not your photo (it is taken off an Australian site). 3. You don't live in Florida.

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            CYong74posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Damn, I was hoping we could continue to ... correspond.

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               theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Well, you should keep going. Why not?

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