Seeking assistance to pass the Quality Assessment of my article

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   Zuminaposted 6 years ago

   Hi,
   
   I seek your feedback for my article to pass through the Quality Assessment. Pointing out the areas in which I need improvement will be a great help as well.
   My Hub - http://hub.me/amlzK
   
   Thank you.

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      Marketing Meritposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      All work must be original and not copied verbatim from other sites.
      
      I searched for the following phrase, at random, and found it on several other sites:
      
      By understanding what to expect during each stage of development, parents can easily capture the teachable moments in everyday life to enhance their child's language development, intellectual growth, social development, and motor skills.

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         Zuminaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you Mam. Il try my best to produce my own articles. And I will not do the same mistake again

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         Zuminaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Mam as a professional will you please give your feed back on my following article too?
         http://hub.me/am8Cg
         
         It's featured. But I want to know about my writing skills. Whether I am good at writing, the areas where I need improvement etc

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   theraggededgeposted 6 years ago

   Yes, it's pretty easy to spot the differences in your own writing and the sections you have copied and pasted. You can use quotes, as long as you cite the source, but you can't pass other people's work off as your own. That's plagiarism.
   
   Some of it seems to come from a Unicef PDF file.

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      Zuminaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Mam. It's  true I took some points from the pdf. By the way I'm a professional in the very field too. Can I post my own ideas? I fear to post them without evidence.

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         DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

         If this is your field, and you wrote something about how to be a good parent by using these child development signs, it could be very useful. As the hub is written, however, it is just a copy of the UNICEF paper and not helpful.
         
         It is great if you were to add a reference and add the UNICEF article, and other textbooks, at the end AFTER your own ideas.

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