I NEED HELP PASSING QUALITY ASSESSMENT TEST

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   Kingsley Onyenweposted 5 years ago

   Dear Hublers.
   
   Please feel free to review my article posted below so I can pass quality assessment
   
   http://hub.me/anmat
   
   Your advice is greatly appreciated

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   melbelposted 5 years ago

   Get rid of the selfies. Nobody reading a travel article is going to care that much about the author.
   
   Get rid of the links. If you want to include citations, do it formally.
   
   Include one picture of the roadways. You don't need three pictures of road. Consider using photos from professional sources as long as they fall into licensing that allows you to use them. Wikimedia Commons has great stuff.

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      Kingsley Onyenweposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   You are sending your reader off the page in the second sentence. Do you think they will return? Remove all the links.
   
   It's 'Brazilian'.
   
   Continents, country and city names always begin with a capital (uppercase) letter.
   
   Your English needs improvement to bring it up to the standard required by HubPages. In fact, it looks like you have used translation software.
   
   I don't think you will get this through QAP without help from a native English speaker.

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      Kingsley Onyenweposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Dear theraggededge,
      Please look through my article again.
      I 've made some adjustments.
      Tell me what you honestly think.
      Constructively criticize the article if needed

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Hi again,
         
         Your title must be put into title case. Try this site: https://capitalizemytitle.com/
         
         Change the spelling of 'Brazillian' to 'Brazilian'.
         
         Remove the / and replace with a -
         
         Change 'city-calabar' to City: Calabar
         
         Remove the frames from your photos. Use only the photos that are interesting - you have too many. No one is interested in photos of roads.
         
         That will do for now.
         
         Good luck.

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   AliciaCposted 5 years ago

   You should proofread the article carefully to catch the language errors. In some places, you haven't started a sentence with a capital letter and the spacing after or before a comma is wrong.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 5 years ago

   We're "Hubbers," not Hublers.
   
   I've never Hubbled in my life.

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      You big fibler. I saw you hubling last week.

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         FatFreddysCatposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         My feet hurt so I may hobble for a bit when I first get out of bed in the morning, but not hubble.

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         Sue Adamsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         
         OK, I haven't even gone to the article in question because all your previous replies indicate that such work should be flagged.

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      NateB11posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Haha! Hilarbious!

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   DrMark1961posted 5 years ago

   I have read your article twice and am still curious as to why you are adding the word Brazilian to your title. Because of Carnival? Carnival is a Catholic holiday and has nothing to do with Brazilian history.
   One of the main problems, however, and the reason that this will not pass the assessment process, is your English. You need to have this read over line by line to find all of the errors. Here is an example: since this is the only time governments allows her employee's close offices the first week of December with full benefits.
   You still have a lot of work to do for this to pass.

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      Kingsley Onyenweposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Dear mark,
      Thank you for pointing that out.noted already

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