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   hanikhalidposted 7 years ago

   I need feedback on my articles https://hubpages.com/health/The-Most-Pr … rs-Disease

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Can't see it. Use the link in the email sent by HubPages.

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         hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         https://hubpages.com/health/The-Most-Pr … rs-Disease

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            DrMark1961posted 7 years agoin reply to this

            That still comes up as 404 page not found. Did you get an email from HP with a link?

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               hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

               Hi DrMark!
               Yes I definitely got an email which mentioned the link as above

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                  hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

                  Providing the link again hope it works  https://hubpages.com/health/The-Most-Pr … rs-Disease

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   Natalie Frankposted 7 years ago

   I think you have a lot of really good information in this article.  The personal reflections really add to it.  The main thing I see is just a number of minor mistakes that need to be corrected.  Go through and proof it really well.  For example, you have incomplete sentences such as
   
   "Similarly, if the plaques are not eliminated initially before their accumulation. They can cause further damage by the addition of tau tangles."
   
   There are some formatting issues for example you need spaces between some paragraphs.
   
   One thing you definitely must fix are the pictures which are copyrighted.  You can't use photos that aren't in the public domain.  They need to be replaced with legal photos.  For example, the image Brain Scans Help Identify Alzheimer's you have a bunch of text below it which is part of the image you took.   It says Image courtesy of Altzheimer's Disease Education and Referral Center but unless you personally got permission to use it from this center along with the text you can't use it and you can't suggest you were the one who obtained permission to use it.  Until all the photos are replace with legal ones, HP will not publish your article.
   
   Good luck.

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      hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Natalie frank,
      
      Thankyou so much for your positive feedback.. I am going to edit the minor mistakes asap and as far as the pictures are concerned so is there any other way to upload pictures without the copyright issue?

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   AliciaCposted 7 years ago

   In addition to what Natalie has said, I think you need to remove the Amazon capsule. Your article isn't about activities for people with Alzheimer's disease and you haven't said anything about why you like the book.
   
   Another change that may be necessary to get the article featured is the addition of references, which are always important in articles about health. I see from your profile that you've studied medical topics, but you haven't listed Alzheimer's disease as one of these topics.
   
   The column of graphics (pictures and videos) at the end of the article looks a bit strange. It would be better to spread these through the article, though I don't whether this change is required in order to get the article featured.

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      hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Ok thanks a lot for your feedback will surely make the amendments.

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   Natalie Frankposted 7 years ago

   You need to get them from a legal source such as Flickr Creative Commons if you attribute it to the photographer.

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      hanikhalidposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Ok thanks a lot Natalie

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   Natalie Frankposted 7 years ago

   You're welcome.  I hope you have continued success on HP.

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