My Article “The Power of Subconscious Mind” has not been featured

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   Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

   
   I have made improvement in article even though has not been featured so please check my article

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   DrMark1961posted 2 years ago

   No one can see it to help you. Did you get an email from HP about the quality? There should be a link to your article there so we can read it.

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   PaulGoodman67posted 2 years ago

   Dr. Mark is right. Also, the image shown is of an article being considered.
   
   You joined three days ago. It's important to understand that HubPages is a marathon, not a sprint. It's unusual to get lots of articles featured and then significant traffic quickly.

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   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   Regarding your article 'Zero to One', is it written by Peter Thiel or Elon Musk? Because you've said both:
   
   "The author, Peter Thiel, tells the story of companies..."
   
   "Zero to one is the title of a book by legendary tech entrepreneur Elon Musk"
   
   There is something odd about this article. Have you copied and pasted some of the material? There's a lot of strange repetition.
   
   It has lots of words but says nothing of any substance.
   
   https://discover.hubpages.com/business/ … om-Nothing
   
   Edit: Also this article does not read as though it has been written by the OP:
   
   https://discover.hubpages.com/money/The … rgan-house

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      PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Yes, that Zero to One article has no flow or structure. It feels like lots of fragments that have been gathered from other places and just thrown together.
      
      The bio is peculiar and has a very different voice to the articles, as well as an apparently lower level of language skill: "I am a article writer at paid for article site and working as a truelancer."

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   I was able to find the article. It’s a bad idea to start the article with an Amazon capsule. In addition, your title suggests that you are going to review the book. You haven’t done this, however. You’ve written facts about the subconscious mind instead of a book review.
   
   In a factual article, you need to include authoritative references to support what you say. In addition, since you haven’t reviewed the book, the Amazon capsule should be deleted, unless you change the text to create a book review. Another point to note is that the photos need sources to show that you have the right to use them.

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   Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

   What you have told I have made changes accordingly.

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      AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Sorry, Patel, you haven’t. You have deleted the Amazon capsule and added a poll. Now the title makes no sense because you haven’t mentioned Joseph Murphy anywhere in the article. The problems of lack of references and photo credits still exist. You also need to capitalize the headings correctly.

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   Miebakagh57posted 2 years ago

   It's becoming very common of new novice here to complain of (their?) articles not being feature, when all that their can provide is unoriginal.                                           I think that that you tube guy, is still directing them here? Wondering.

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      Hassib Abidposted 2 years agoin reply to this

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         Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Hi Hassib, what's going on?                                             I think those would be writers here, with the intention of murdering either the Queen's, or Uncle Sam's Engllsh, aren't nice guys.                                             A lovely day to you too.

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            Ma786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

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               Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Welcome to hubpages.

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                  theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                  That's Muna786. The one with the copied articles. Check out the profile.

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                     Hassib hussainposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                     Hi, thereggededge 
                      
                     Most respectfully,
                      
                     I am Muna786. Now I am trying to start my work as a true writer. Why are you trying to ban my account? Please do not become a hurdle in my way. Thanks

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                     Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

                     Bev, thank you. The truth is confirm above. Let's hope the subject this time zero into originality.                                        Have a lovely day.

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                        Hassib hussainposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                        Miebakagg check your email please.

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                           PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

                           Hmm, and starting your "work as a true writer" involves setting up a fake account to fool people?

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                              Hassib hussainposted 2 years agoin reply to this

                              I do not need your sympathy.

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   Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

   Please sir , Guide me  How can  I improve my Article.Tell  My Mistake

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   Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

   I am New at this Platform

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      PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Here's the essence:
      
      HubPages requires original and informative articles written in a high standard of English.
      
      If you copy other writers' work, don't convey info well, don't have excellent English skills, you will struggle.
      
      Even if you are successful, it will take months or years to start getting substantive views and earnings.

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    Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

    If you click on "Help" top right, you will find a wealth of information that should answer all your questions. Read everything, then ask here if you aren't sure about something.

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    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    In Zero to One, the first four paragraphs are virtually double ups just repeated in slightly different wording. the whole article is very repetitive and very confusing.
    
    The Power of the Subconscious Mind, is listed under book reviews, but nowhere in the article does it admit to being that. It does have an Amazon capsule advertising a book by that name. I wonder if all the text of the article is taken from that book?

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    Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

    Whether you want sympathy or not is irrelevant. You have not been offered it, nor will you get it.

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    theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

    There are three of them?
    
    I wasn't even addressing the Hussain account.

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    Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

    Seems so, theraggededge, the guy is shameless.

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       theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

       What is strange is how they can't resist drawing attention to themselves.

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       CYong74posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       I think he messed up. He set up one account using a male picture, then another using a female picture. He might have intended to reply to Miebakagh using the male one but, well, you know what happened.
       
       Silly. And disgraceful.

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          Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

          'He might have intended to reply to Miebakagh using the male one but,...'                                          Why? Is Patel addressing Miebakagh only in this forum?                                      The truth is that if this Patel is really Muna768, he found me helpful before Dr. Mark1961 did a private sleuthing to  exposed his political story.                                     Again, why did Patel apply to me with a female image as. Hassib Hussain? Again, this account is banned. Further, why did he appeal to me with no photo or zero profile image?                                    So, in the beginning only Miebakagh57 was being petitioned to dated?

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             CYong74posted 2 years agoin reply to this

             Miebakagh: Patel wasn't talking to you. That Muna786 guy, with one of his fake accounts, was the one.
             
             I don't think Patel is Muna786 too.

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                Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

                I presume so.

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    Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

    I have no idea what he thinks he is up to. Perhaps he simply doesn't understand what he is doing wrong.

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    FatFreddysCatposted 2 years ago

    Doot... doot... doot... another one bites the dust....

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    Stephen Tomkinsonposted 2 years ago

    Or does he?

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    PaulGoodman67posted 2 years ago

    Ma786 and Hassib H are gone, but Patel is still churning out iffy articles on Discover. I guess HP will either take action, or they won't...

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       Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       I think this Patel could be the same as the original Ma786?

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    Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

    I have only one Account and  I have change my profile. Instead of guiding me you are just making fun of my language skills .I am coming from Gujarat, india So my mother tongue is Gujarati.I accept That I am week at writing professional english.

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       AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

       The problem is that the English level in your articles is considerably better than the level in your forum posts. I am certainly not making fun of your language skills, but it would be interesting to know why your articles are written better than your forum posts.

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       PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       Having a first language other than English isn't the issue.
       
       The problem is that when the forum poster has a completely different writing voice and skill set to what has been published, experience suggests that plagiarism is taking place.
       
       It's unfair on the writer or writers whose work has been stolen, if this is the case. It can also be a breach of copyright law.

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    Patel Vatsalposted 2 years ago

    Respected sir Your Question is Good I  am interested in reading books and I make summary in my own word.Then I  use software to translate normal English into standard English.

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       AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

       What is the specific software that you use, Patel?

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       Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       After reading books and you make summaries (make the summaries in your words), but don't ever translated it into any English standard again.

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       PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       Patel - I would be interested to know what specific software you are using to create the articles, too?

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          Miebakagh57posted 2 years agoin reply to this

          Everyone now seems to get interested in the sofware Patel use. That's dumb while they's no answer. What, if Patel's the creator? I presume that. Would he talk?

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    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Vatsal, I suggest you devote some time to go through the Hubpages Help end to end before asking any questions. You would get most of your queries resolved. You just need to spend a good 3-4 days at least to know what kind of content is expected in Hubpages.
    
    So one simple piece of advice - before you write, read !!!

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