I'd like feedback on my article: Top 10 Most Famous Actresses In Hollywood...

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   startalimposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Top 10 Most Famous Actresses In Hollywood (2019 Edition) (must be signed in to view)

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   There are so many grammar errors in this article that it will not pass QAP.
   
   Here's just one sentence with corrections in brackets.
   
   "Hey guy's ('Hey guys' should be dropped altogether and it's guys not guy's anyway) today t'm (I'm) gonna (never put a contraction like 'gonna' in text, it should be 'going to') tell you about top 10 famous actresses (the ten most famous actresses) in hollywood (Hollywood with a capital H) at (the)present time.
   
   You cannot lift images from the Internet, as you have done, without permission. Images must be Creative Commons Licensed.

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      startalimposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      If I'm not wrong, i made many changes. Will you review my article and tell me what issue i still missed?

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   FatFreddysCatposted 6 years ago

   You're probably way over the limit on Amazon links. HP only likes one or two per article, not one for every paragraph.
   
   Also, I wonder how up to date your info is. If this is supposed to be a "2019 edition" list, two of your picks  -- Jessica Alba and Megan Fox --  have fallen off the radar in recent years. Jessica's last film was released in 2017, and she currently focuses more on her health & beauty business, which has made more money than she ever did as an actress.
   Meanwhile, Megan's been reduced to bit parts in Ninja Turtles movies.

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      startalimposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      For you known, "2019 edition" called for famous actresses ranking is up to date to 2019, not associated with actresses personal lifestyle.
      
      As you sid, "You're probably way over the limit on Amazon links. HP only likes one or two per article, not one for every paragraph." You mean if i remove the links of Amazon, then the article will be Qualified?
      
      Please check out, my another article "Top 10 Best Lifetime Movies on Netflix (2019 Edition)" (https://hubpages.com/entertainment/Top- … nt-Edition), where i also linked Amazon products like this one.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 6 years ago

   I have no idea what any of this means.
   
   
   
   I'm not a staff member so you're asking the wrong guy, but it's worth a shot.
   
   
   
   Oh good Lord, no. I hate Lifetime movies.

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      startalimposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your response!

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         FatFreddysCatposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Apparently "Thanks for your response!" = "I am going to completely ignore all of your suggestions."
         
         ...dude is banned now anyway, so... all's well that ends well, I guess.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   The people in this forum are volunteers, we don't work for HubPages. We offer advice to new writers on how to improve their work. We can't go through your article and edit it for grammar, that's your job.
   
   HP requires that articles be written in near-perfect English.

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      startalimposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I agree with you and I also proofread the article as well.

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