I'd like feedback on my article: Discrimination Among Humans , Why??

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  1. Saneya Arslan profile image60
    Saneya Arslanposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Discrimination Among Humans , Why?? (must be signed in to view)

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 months ago

    Your article has many grammar and spelling errors in it. Punctuation is a problem; there is always a space following commas, periods, etc.

    Images must be Creative Commons licensed, that is free from copyright restrictions.

    1. Saneya Arslan profile image60
      Saneya Arslanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you Rupert Taylor,
      I will certainly rectify my article for these mistakes.

  3. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 6 months ago

    Further to the issues Rupert raised, you also give examples of a restaurant and a caravan park 'discriminating' against children and teens.

    What you need to understand is that if a restaurant has a rule that they won't allow children after a certain time, then that's their prerogative. It's their business, they get to make the rules. If it is a licensed premises (serving alcohol) then barring children is the right thing to do. And think about the other customers--some go to a 'grown-up' restaurant to get away from their children for some quality adult time.

    If a caravan park doesn't want its customers disturbed by teenagers roaming around at night, then that is also perfectly fair.

    You have to think about the fact that just because you might disagree with a rule, it's not actually discrimination.

    1. Saneya Arslan profile image60
      Saneya Arslanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I had definitely not paid attention to this point. You are right, if I might disagree with a rule, its my opinion. I shouldn't classify it as Discrimination. Thanks alot smile

  4. psycheskinner profile image84
    psycheskinnerposted 6 months ago

    If you want to argue otherwise, do so by using a specific legal definition of discrimination and showing how it applies.

    1. Saneya Arslan profile image60
      Saneya Arslanposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      I had, by true means, used the legal definition but I had made mistakes in Age Discrimination, to which you might refer. Thank you! I will look forward to my article with your's point of view.


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