I'd like feedback on my article: Are Essay Writing Services Damaging Ethics and.

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   Donald Ngonyoposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Are Essay Writing Services Damaging Ethics and Abilities of Students? (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      Who is your audience for this piece? It's important to know what you are trying to achieve. Students are unlikely to care; tutors already know about it. People not involved in academia aren't going to be interested. Parents may be, but there's not much they can do if their son or daughter aren't living at home. In other words, you need to work out if anyone is looking for this topic.
      
      There are some grammatical errors, but they are minor. Try running it through Grammarly or get someone to proofread it, (21st century, lower-case c). Go through the article and weed out unnecessary words, for example, the first sentence is superfluous.
      
      Change the image to reflect the content, i.e. maybe someone writing an essay. Don't forget to cite the image source; it must be legal to use.
      
      Good luck.

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      AliciaCposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I think you've raised some important points. I'm concerned about the problem of students using academic writing services. I noticed one thing that looked a little strange in your article. In two places, you've written a note such as (Usborne, 2017), but there are no sources at the end of the article to show which of Usborne's articles you're referencing.

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   The article is verbose and needs an edited, so the reader doesn't get lost in redundancy.  The title is long, Essay Writing Services Worth the Effort, something like that, or Damaging Effects of Using Essay Writing Services.  You are citing sources and need to add links at the end of the article.  Be more direct in writing, and get to the point faster. The capsule titles are too long, and you need to rework them, so they are shorter and more direct.

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