Feedback on my writing

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  1. chenjdw profile image86
    chenjdwposted 4 years ago

    How to get this writing featured:

    How Does It Work and Why
    https://hubpages.com/education/How-Does-It-Work-and-Why




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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

    Your article is already featured. I think you mean how can you get it onto a niche site?

    First, you need to fix the grammar errors; try using the free program Grammarly.

    There are a lot of random capitalizations that need to be changed.

    The headline doesn't really work, I doubt many people are searching for information about "It."

    I'm out of my comfort zone when it comes to science but I spotted a couple of mistakes.

    "Everything that happens in the Universe is regulated, controlled, guided by a set of invisible physical laws," Chaos theory suggests otherwise.

    "The 94 chemical elements we identified on Earth make life possible." At last count there were 118 elements of which 24 are synthetic.

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    1. DrMark1961 profile image96
      DrMark1961posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I think he posts on here every few weeks hoping for a few readers so that his articles do not become unfeatured for lack of traffic.
      Perhaps he does not understand that no matter how many readers he may have from the forums, his article will still be unfeatured if he has no search engine readers.
      None of the changes anyone suggests to this person are ever taken. The titles continue just as they are.

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 4 years ago

    Thanks Dr. Mark. Looks like I got suckered into offering help that will be ignored.

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    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Yep, I've given up with this one big_smile

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      1. DrMark1961 profile image96
        DrMark1961posted 4 years agoin reply to this

        Me too, but he manages to catch one or two every time.

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  4. FatFreddysCat profile image94
    FatFreddysCatposted 4 years ago

    To the OP: take a hint. Self promotion in the forums is a no-no. People are onto you.

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    1. chenjdw profile image86
      chenjdwposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.
      I got it.
      I am basically an idea person.
      I need to work on better communication techniques.

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