Why my posts are not featured even after writing more than 750 words.

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   Pkumarpal8posted 5 years ago

   Why my posts are not featured even after writing more than 750 words,  using bullet points and more.
   I recently published 2 articles.
   1. Sarkari Result
   2. Indian states and Capitals..
   
   Please suggest me what else do I need to improve its quality so that it can be featured. Otherwise I will leave this hubpages community.

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      The main issue is your English. HubPages is an American site and requires a high standard of written English skills.
      
      For example, in your article, "Boys are Better or Girls" (published under Sports & Recreation), you wrote, "Boys and girls are the two main characters of a human being."
      
      What you mean is 'Males and females are the dominant sexes in the human species."
      
      Boys and girls are simply terms for the younger members of human beings. They are not 'characters'. You need to use the proper scientific terms when discussing a subject like this. 'Girls and boys' stop being such when they reach young adulthood.
      
      Then you wrote, "As we all know that without a boy a girl cannot survive and without a girl a boy cannot."
      
      That is incorrect. Of course boys and girls can survive without one another. However, if you are referring to the survival of the human race, then yes, you are right, however, again you must use the correct terminology.
      
      And then there's this, "As the time passes away the girl also becomes very very naughty."
      
      What? How do you think a western audience is going to respond to that bit of nonsense? You have to remember that you are writing for a global readership, not just for people from your own country and culture.
      
      So what I'm trying to explain is that HubPages is never going to approve an article that contains factual and scientific errors, especially in the first two sentences. Neither will it accept one that is riddled with grammatical errors. Improve your written English and your articles will be featured.
      
      Good luck.

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         psycheskinnerposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         For the survival of the human race, you are still going to need one of each.  Or we could convert to parthenogenesis and dispense with all those unnecessary males.

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      DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      You can try posting your articles to your own website. See how that works for you. Threatening "I will leave this hubpages community" will only work if someone is concerned.

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   Pkumarpal8posted 5 years ago

   Thanks a lot for the useful information. I will try to improve my English as soon as possible. But can you please tell me what is the best way to improve my pronunciation and communication skills as I think you are the only teacher who can show me the right direction. Please.

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Pkumarpal8,
      
      I can't teach you those skills, I'm a writer not a teacher. There are many free websites and YouTube channels that can help you improve.
      
      What I will suggest is that you make sure that the person teaching you is a native English speaker. This is really important because when writing English you have to be much more precise than when speaking it.

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   Pkumarpal8posted 5 years ago

   Ok thanks

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