I'd like feedback on my article: Indian Occupied Kashmir Issue

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   itsTalhaposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Indian Occupied Kashmir Issue (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      We have seen many, many articles on this topic on HubPages recently. All saying, essentially the same thing, i.e. "They're wrong, we're right, and we're going to nuke them." Unless they've been written by someone on the 'other side', of course. Perhaps you could write about something else?

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         itsTalhaposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Suggest me what would you like to read

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   The quality of your English is not up to the level required by HubPages. You are writing in a version of the language I'll call Indian sub-continent English that omits the use of definite (the) and indefinite (a) articles.
   
   I'm also curious as to how the talk about nuclear war squares with your other article "Islam Teaches Peace."

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      itsTalhaposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I have written 3 articles on Hubpage. But this is happening first time that both of Article aren’t passing quality.
      
      Islam actually teaches peace. But I just quoted what Imran khan said.

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         You cannot copy and paste from other sources.
         
         On your Muslims Love for Muhammad article...
         
         For example, the text, "He took a great interest in the welfare of all people and had great compassion for people in trouble. The Prophet Muhammad imitated the attributes of God par excellence...", appears on many other sites.
         
         There's a huge difference in the writing on your article compared to your writing here in the forum. Its obvious that you haven't written the text in the article. Some of it appears on Facebook. https:// www. facebook. com/notes/dr-farhat-hashmis-lecture/love-for-prophet-muhammad-sal-allaahu-alaihi-wasallam-right-perspective/506930245996549/

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   Nicoartzposted 5 years ago

   Over all the article was terrible. However, there are similar articles on the hub that are written better than this one. They may even consider this a "duplicated article". Also, your English needs a little pollishing. Work on sentence structure. Plus the title could use work.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

   "Islam actually teaches peace. But I just quoted what Imran khan said."
   
   But, Imran Khan is a Muslim, so my question remains valid.

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      Will Apseposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I don't think a person's religion entirely defines who that person is.

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      itsTalhaposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      If India will bomb Pakistan then tell me what should we do?

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   Doneta Wrateposted 5 years ago

   Their are many different denominations of Muslims, like their are many different denominations of Protestants.  For example there are Sunis,  Shiites,  etc.  They tend to fight each other.  They don't get along very well with each other.

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