I'd like feedback on my article: Henna. Sudan and North African Fashion...

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    samiagamieposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Henna. Sudan and North African Fashion Tradition (must be signed in to view)

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    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      This is an old article that now needs a lot of work to get up to current standards.

      You have to use images that carry the correct license or are your own. You can't just republish photos you found on the internet.

      It needs a summary and the title needs to be corrected. There are grammatical errors throughout.

      You also need to get rid of those Amazon capsules because you haven't mentioned the products in your text.

      Good luck.

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        samiagamieposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks a bunch for your time! yes its old one. I will follow your recommendations for sure. Appreciate your input.

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    There are several problems here.

    "Henna. Sudan and North African Fashion Tradition" Don't put a period in a title. Better would be "Henna Use in Sudanese and North African Fashion Tradition"

    The article needs a good proofread; there are several spelling and punctuation errors.

    You can only use images that are Creative Commons or Public Domain licensed. It's best to sprinkle them throughout rather than stack them.

    Your article is too short. HubPages asks us to write pieces that are 750 to 1,250 words long.

    Spend some time reading advice in the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

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      samiagamieposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Yes, i just started to visit the hubpage help link. I have learned a lot about how to make a good article.  Thanks for your help

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