I'd like feedback on my article: Water, Hydration and Health

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  1. Ammara Hameed profile image57
    Ammara Hameedposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article as i have changed it now? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Water, Hydration and Health

    1. CYong74 profile image95
      CYong74posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      There are various problems, with the biggest one being grammar errors. There are barely any sentences without an error.

    2. OldRoses profile image95
      OldRosesposted 8 weeks agoin reply to this

      I agree with Rupert Taylor.  What many aspiring authors for whom English is not their native language don't seem realize is that HubPages is an American site with a mainly American audience.  Authors must write in perfect English.  This can be very difficult, even for native speakers of English.  Work on your English language skills before attempting to write for this site.

  2. DrMark1961 profile image97
    DrMark1961posted 8 weeks ago

    You stated:
    Benefits of Detox Water :

        Helps With Weight Loss
        Improves Digestive Health
        Improves Mood and Energy Levels
        Boosts Immune Function
    Do you have any proof to back these claims up? What studies have been done to prove this? Where are your references?
    Even if you fix all of the grammatical errors your article is not going to be approved wihen you add claims like this.

  3. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 weeks ago

    We've been here before; just a few days ago. The punctuation, grammar, and spelling are all very wobbly and doom the article to rejection.

    Images must be free of copyright restrictions.

    Mainly though, you need to make significant improvements in your command of English to be published here.

  4. theraggededge profile image97
    theraggededgeposted 8 weeks ago

    Your new article on hair loss will also fail QAP for the same reasons this one has. Again you haven't added sources for the claims you make.

 
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