I'd like feedback on my article: Net Metering

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   gabrielcuetoposted 20 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process.
   
   Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Net Metering

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      AliciaCposted 20 months agoin reply to this

      I think that as I mentioned before you will need to change the pictures in order for your article to be featured. The two images in the first photo are shown on another site as an animation and don’t have the correct license for use on HubPages. In addition, who is “we” in your caption?
      
      The last photo mentions the name of an energy company, which should be removed. In addition, if it’s not your company, the business may not like their bills displayed.

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         gabrielcuetoposted 19 months agoin reply to this

         AliciaC, thank you for all your help and time. I dis what you suggested and the article still not featuring. Any other ideas where can it be improved?
         
         Thank you

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            AliciaCposted 19 months agoin reply to this

            Hi. I think you should go through the article and make every point clear and stress that the process you describe is not illegal. You also need to check some of your grammar.
            
            I admit that I don’t know much about utility companies and their operation, but one thing that you could clarify is what does PV mean? You mention it without saying what it stands for.

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               gabrielcuetoposted 19 months agoin reply to this

               Thank you AliciaC. You've been very kind. English is not my native language and some times I need help.

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               gabrielcuetoposted 19 months agoin reply to this

               Thank you AliciaC, the article was finally published.

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                  AliciaCposted 19 months agoin reply to this

                  Congratulations!

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      Joshua Crowderposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Here are some recommended corrections:
      
      Give kW during the day and we take kW at night…. Maybe add more context
      
      As a result, we have…. Maybe use- The resulting net metered Kilowatts
      
      The hose or business….Spelling
      
      Per cities and utility guidelines….city
      
      What is the acronym AMS?....Explain before first use and maybe since you use it to sum up the whole article explain AMS early on.
      
      You should continue to polish and work on the structure.

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         gabrielcuetoposted 19 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you, Mr. Crowder. I did the changes, I hope this one features.  This one has been giving me a headache. English is not my native language and some times I need help.
         
         Thank you again.

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         gabrielcuetoposted 19 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you Mr. Crowder, the article was finally published.

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