Feedback on Article
Hi there,
I can see a few issues with this:
It appears you have created a thin re-write of other articles on the internet, for instance: https://www.forbes.com/sites/nicolefish … your-brain
There's no point reproducing work that isn't your own; it will always be picked up and rejected.
'Obviate' doesn't mean what you intended it to mean. The word you need is 'prevent'.
The article is too short. It needs to be around 1,000 words for this kind of topic.
Subtitles should be in title case.
Don't use too many exclamation points. It's unprofessional.
HubPages isn't a blogging platform
Good luck.
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