I'd like feedback on my article: UnsettledYetAtPeace

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  1. Ekta Pahujani profile image71
    Ekta Pahujaniposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: UnsettledYetAtPeace (must be signed in to view)

    1. OldRoses profile image95
      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      This is a blog post.  HubPages is not a blogging platform.  It requires authors to write magazine type articles that answer questions like "how do I ...".  If you want to write a blog, try Blogger or WordPress.  They are both free blogging sites and more appropriate for you type of writing.

      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Careful now, Caren. You are risking the wrath of the Will big_smile

        Oh, no, wait... I forgot. It's just me, isn't it? big_smilebig_smile

        1. OldRoses profile image95
          OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          I've never been fond of bullies.  It's Will who should be afraid.  If he continues to stalk and harass you, he could find himself banished from HubPages.

          1. theraggededge profile image96
            theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            He doesn't bother me one bit smile

  2. AliciaC profile image96
    AliciaCposted 2 years ago

    Hi. I understand why you ran the words together in the title, but I doubt whether the title would attract much traffic in its current format. Titles and subtitles need to be written in APA title case style, even when an article is written in an informal style.

    You need to read the article carefully in order to find and correct the English problems. You also need to remove the excessive amount of bold text and the italics.

    Adding relevant information about relationship problems from authoritative sources would probably be helpful as well. At the moment, the article is entirely about someone’s experiences and your own opinions. Sharing experiences and thoughts can be useful, but since you’ve placed the article in the Gender and Relationships category, I think you need to add some information from relationship experts. This is especially important because you refer to “the girl with suicidal thoughts” in the article. That phrase could be a major problem and should be removed. Anyone with suicidal thoughts needs help from a health professional.

    1. Ekta Pahujani profile image71
      Ekta Pahujaniposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Ok i understand.  I will update it as suggested by you. Thanks a ton..


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