I'd like feedback on my article: Three Stipulations for Man's contentment

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  1. Indelible whisper profile image63
    Indelible whisperposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Three Stipulations for Man's contentment

    1. OldRoses profile image94
      OldRosesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Your language skills are not good enough to write on this platform.  Translation software is not sufficient.  It makes literal translations with many mistakes.  I could not read more than a few sentences in your article.  It is complete nonsense.

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      "Carefree as they are, men don't burden their personalities with drama and complexities. Their women are enough for that."

      Yuk. Horrible stereotypical generalisations.

      Didn't bother reading any further.

      1. DrMark1961 profile image96
        DrMark1961posted 3 years agoin reply to this

        Couldnt read it all but was kind of funny, in a sickly sort of way. It will soon be moved to Letterpile.

    3. Al Stine profile image95
      Al Stineposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hell of an article,

      "Man is weak and highly dependant on the ladies in his life. It begins with mother; sister adds indescribable joy."

      "He experiences enough fun in teasing. I think he inherits teasing right from birth. He teases his mother through mischief and troubles. He loves harassing his sister (if any) and other peer-girls. As an adult, he enjoys teasing women. What a bold and fascinating trait!"

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 years ago

    Well, raggededge I read a bit further and came across this gem: "For men, happiness not necessarily lies in details, it rather flows easily."

    What the blue, blistering, blazes does that mean? I went no further, and I am happy in not knowing..

    1. wilderness profile image94
      wildernessposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Well, if you listen to Jeff Foxworthy (or was it Bill Engvall?), if you ask any man what he wants the answer will be "I want a beer and I wanna see something nekkid!".  Guess that flows easily...

      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        big_smile big_smile

        I think this article says exactly that, but in a lot more words. I did read on and apparently we women are supposed to allow you to have your 'naughty moments'.

        What, like not putting the toilet seat down? Forgetting to empty the cat litter?

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      You are very brave big_smile

      Happy flowing, Rupes xx

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 years ago

    Sorry, but I bailed out after the first text block. Total gibberish.

    1. DrMark1961 profile image96
      DrMark1961posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      So are you leaning towards Letterpile or Soapboxie?

  4. Jacqueline4390 profile image83
    Jacqueline4390posted 3 years ago

    I read the entire article. It was interesting to me even if I didn’t agree with it entirely. There are a lot of generalizations regarding male behavior. Never get emotional, that’s truly debatable. Depends on the man. Do you have any examples to validate your claims? Have you done any verifiable research? When dealing with such a subject, there needs to be some justification for your claims.


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