I'd like feedback on my article: Evergreen Businesses:

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   Mohsin Jadoonposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Evergreen Businesses:

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      You need to have someone who is a native speaker of English go over your article to correct the many errors.  HubPages is an American site and will only publish articles written in perfect English.
      
      I also have to question using the current Fortune 500 companies to determine evergreen businesses.  The list of Fortune 500 companies changes year to year and decade to decade.  Technology changes over time, so companies change over time.  There really is no business that will last for "inifinity".

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         Mohsin Jadoonposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thank-you OldRoses for a glance to my hub.    This hub was featured but after some days it was removed.
         
         You are completely right about the dynamic environment. I have not claimed that these businesses last for “infinity”. It’s about the “demand” that lasts. I guess you don’t know much about demand and supply principles of economics.

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            OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            From your own description:
            
            
            
            So you did, in fact, say that the businesses will last for infinity. 
            
            Before you insult people, you should get to know them first.  I worked on Wall Street for many years so I am well aquainted with the principles of economics.

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               Mohsin Jadoonposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               You are misunderstanding the words. I’m not insulting. I’m just asking for help from senior hubbers. Especially those who experienced the removal of hub tag from a published article.
               
               Secondly, the word demand is used in the second line as a connotation.

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   If you argue and rebut the advice you get, you won't get more.  When people gift you their time and input, use what you can, put the rest aside.  Even if you think the advice is wrong now, if a bunch of different people say the same thing, you should probably reconsider.

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