I'd like feedback on my article: Earning solutions from home easy and quick

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   Shazleen Afridiposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Earning solutions from home easy and quick (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Your title and your article don't match.  Your title promises readers that they will learn how to earn money easily and quickly but none of the solutions you suggest allow anyone to quickly earn money.  You even admit it in your last sentence that people must "...  be patient you will make it one day." 
      
      In addition to cleaning up all of the language errors, you need to either change your title or change your content.

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         Shazleen Afridiposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks alots for reply

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   AliciaCposted 3 years ago

   Hi. You need to proofread your article very carefully because it contains English errors. It also contains factual mistakes.
   
   HubPages is not a blogging site. In addition, your title says that earning will be easy and quick. Though some people do earn good money on HubPages, the process is neither easy nor quick. It requires hard work, a considerable amount of time, and many articles of high quality. I notice that you've just joined HubPages. Unless you have another account or have interviewed a lot of writers here, I don't see how you have a basis for discussing the site at the moment.
   
   Another problem is that you’ve listed HubPages under “Content Writing” for companies or sales people. HubPages doesn’t allow articles that promote a business. You should make this point clear.
   
   You haven’t discussed all the points in your “Earning Ideas” capsule. Your article needs to be at least 700 words long and preferably longer, so it needs more information.

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   Shazleen Afridiposted 3 years ago

   Thanks alot for reply I will overcome english errors

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