I'd like feedback on my article: 18 SIGNS TO SHOW HE IS NO LONGER INTO YOU

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   Debbie kingsposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: 18 SIGNS TO SHOW HE IS NO LONGER INTO YOU (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I see that you have just joined HubPages.  Before you put any more work into your article, you should spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right).  They will tell you everything that you need to know to write and format articles for HubPages.

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         Debbie kingsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you ma, I really appreciate the time you took to read my article and tell me where I need to make corrections. I will do just that. Have a blessed and fufilled day.

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      erorantesposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hello miss. Kings. I like your article. You need to work in your pictures organization. You need to read hub learning center at hub pages.  I wish you a pleasant night.

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         Debbie kingsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for taking time to go through my article and I will make possible corrections...Do have a blessed and fufiiled day

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   Philip Agutuposted 5 years ago

   It's a good and informative hub. Although I am also learning,  most of my recent hubs pass the QAP within a day or two and I am going to share what I've noticed in your hub with the hope that when you make the corrections, it will pass the QAP.
   1. Avoid using All Caps in your title and subtitles.
   2. Use the "Organise your hubs" tool when writing. It's on your right. I think it's best when an image capsule is followed by a text capsule. Avoid two images without a text in between.
   3. The characteristics such as COMMUNICATION, TRUST, JELOUSY, and the rest, should be under a heading tag. Use H2 tag and H3 to arrange your content and make it engaging.
   5. Use spaces in your "author bio" and also check your spellings, for example, the word "Cousellor" should be "Counselor".
   4. Check your grammar.
   Most of your spelling and grammar mistakes can be eliminated by using a spelling and grammar tool.
   Aso read what other hubbers write to get a picture of how you should organize your hub. All the best.

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      Debbie kingsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks sir, I will make possible corrections.

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