I'd like feedback on my article: Key Techniques for Reducing Study Stress for...

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  1. Chloe Ruth Daniel profile image51
    Chloe Ruth Danielposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Key Techniques for Reducing Study Stress for Students (must be signed in to view)

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi, Chloe. You'll need to remove the link to the tutorial agency where you work in order to get the article featured.

    1. Chloe Ruth Daniel profile image51
      Chloe Ruth Danielposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      So apart from that the article is good to go?

  3. theraggededge profile image97
    theraggededgeposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Chloe, I would remove 'and is a valuable blogger' from the article bio. If you must have it, change it to 'popular' or 'enthusiastic'.

    Your images need to link back to the original url so it's easy for the editors to check if they need to.

    There are some grammar issues, for instance, "Stress has various types..." Stress doesn't have anything. You could say, "Stress manifests in various ways..."

    "One is Eustress also known as beneficial stress..." You don't need to capitalise eustress. And there should be a comma after it. Again 'distress' shouldn't be capitalised. It's worth learning the rules about caps.

    "As not all the fingers are the same, just like that every person has their tendencies to deal with stress and for some people, it can be quite a big deal."

    That's one messy sentence smile It reads as though English is not your first language. The simile is not necessary and just confuses the issue. "Every person deals with stress in their own way". Try to reduce the number of words. Make your sentences clean and to the point.

    There are many more errors which require fixing but I haven't got time to go through them all. Try Grammarly and Hemingway - both free apps to help with grammar and style.

    Good luck.

    1. Chloe Ruth Daniel profile image51
      Chloe Ruth Danielposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thanks so much for your response. I am going to work on these things and try again.


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