Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: Ancient China Lesson for Kids: Shang Dynasty
Hi there,
Firstly, I'd work on the title. Get rid of the word 'kids'. It always looks unprofessional to me. "Lesson Plan: Ancient China, the Shang Dynasty", or some variation.
Tweak your bio. Your religion is immaterial in the context of the article.
You must add a credit to your photos. They have to be Creative Commons licensed, in the Public Domain, or belong to you. Link back to the source.
You can embed videos rather than just link to them.
Remove the underline from the book titles; they look like links but they aren't.
Remove the affiliate link to the commercial curriculum.
I can't comment on the content, but I was expecting an article on the topic/s, rather than a lesson plan. You can remedy that by changing the title.
Your ideas and suggestions are very interesting and, as a home-schooler myself (they're grown-up now), I think it's a good article.
Good luck.
Thank you for the helpful comments! I'll work on implementing them.
Needing to adding the word "plan" to the title & removing the underlines from books is good to know. The photos without link sources are mine. I appreciate your practical feedback suggestions!
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