Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: Warning! Your Kids Should Not Drink Water from a Garden Hose
Hi miss bishamonsr. I was reading your article. You most read the hub pages learning center. The guide to write an article for hub pages is there. You need two extra picture for your article. Your article inform about a drink that you can buy at different locations for kids. Which makes your article a semi blog . Your tittle does not cover only the danger of drinking water on the hoses but it talks about the drink to make kids strong. Your title needs to cover the entire information on the article. Check on your grammar again in case you made mistakes.
You need to use an authoritative (e.g. peer-reviewed) source for health information -- both why hoses might be full of toxins and why pediasure will help kids exposed to toxins.
Expand on the information too about the fact that water in hoses can be stagnant and contain harmful bacteria. (which is why non-return valves are supposed to be used for outside taps/spigots to stop the water siphoning back into the house)
Hi
I just check your article. It was well-informed. Maybe it would be great if you add kore information. It's a good article for parents ^_^
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