I'd like feedback on my article: Warning! Your Kids Should Not Drink Water from.

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  1. BishamonSr profile image44
    BishamonSrposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Warning! Your Kids Should Not Drink Water from a Garden Hose

    1. erorantes profile image46
      erorantesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi miss bishamonsr. I was reading your article. You most read the hub pages learning center. The guide to write an article for hub pages is there. You need two extra picture for your article. Your article inform about a drink that you can buy at different locations for kids. Which makes your article a semi blog . Your tittle does not cover only the danger of drinking water on the hoses but it talks about the drink to make kids strong. Your title needs to cover the entire information on the article. Check on your grammar again in case you made mistakes.

      1. BishamonSr profile image44
        BishamonSrposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Ok. Thanks a lot.

  2. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 2 years ago

    You need to use an authoritative (e.g. peer-reviewed) source for health information -- both why hoses might be full of toxins and why pediasure will help kids exposed to toxins.

  3. BishamonSr profile image44
    BishamonSrposted 2 years ago


  4. eugbug profile image96
    eugbugposted 2 years ago

    Expand on the information too about the fact that water in hoses can be stagnant and contain harmful bacteria. (which is why non-return valves are supposed to be used for outside taps/spigots to stop the water siphoning back into the house)

    1. BishamonSr profile image44
      BishamonSrposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Oh wow! Thank you!

  5. Nazmunn profile image76
    Nazmunnposted 2 years ago

    I just check your article. It was well-informed. Maybe it would be great if you add kore information. It's a good article for parents ^_^

  6. BishamonSr profile image44
    BishamonSrposted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much!


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