I'd like feedback on my article: One lesson for Nature

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  1. Sushmanayak45479 profile image45
    Sushmanayak45479posted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: One lesson for Nature (must be signed in to view)

  2. DrMark1961 profile image98
    DrMark1961posted 7 weeks ago

    Will Apse has some suggestions for improvement in one of your other threads but you need to read and comprehend what theraggededge has wrtiten too. Your English is just too garbled for this site.
    No one is going to get rhough that huge block of disorganized thoughts. Unless you read and learn how to format correctly, and organzie your thoughts and express them coherently, all of your hubs are going to fail the assessment program.
    None of them will be published at this site.

  3. Sushmanayak45479 profile image45
    Sushmanayak45479posted 7 weeks ago

    We are face global warming many natural thing are unbalance like whether water level temperature increase sea water many animals in danger whith struggle life what are our Responsibility currect the Schutaion so we start first level. Thank you.

    1. AliciaC profile image97
      AliciaCposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      It's not enough to have important ideas to share. You need to express your ideas in a way that is understandable and in a format that is easy to read. If you don't do this, people are unlikely to read your articles.

      1. Sushmanayak45479 profile image45
        Sushmanayak45479posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

        Hello thank for reply my problem to not understand format my english no well because I am Indian my language are hindi and believe me try my best I need guidelines. Thank you

    2. CYong74 profile image96
      CYong74posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      This is gibberish. Are you human or a bot?

      1. Sushmanayak45479 profile image45
        Sushmanayak45479posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

        Hello sir, madam i agree  my article can be gibberish and I tell you respect fully I am a human not a bot because my language are hindi and my english not well writeing my passion I like writing story  and I write article in hindi and translate to english that's why reasons my article look gibberish those things I feel about nature so try to write thank you for your feedback.

        1. CYong74 profile image96
          CYong74posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

          I wasn't referring to your hub. I was talking about your forum reply.

          Regardless, why are you translating from Hindi and publishing jumbled text, especially when you know the text is coming out nonsensical? However important your message is, you are wasting everybody's time. If you really want to be a writer, please begin by respecting your readers. Everything else about who you are, what your feelings are and what your first language is, are secondary. It is always about the writing you put forth.

        2. OldRoses profile image97
          OldRosesposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

          If you are using translation software, you have to understand that the software does a direct translation from Hindi to English without any grammar or syntax.  The result is gibberish.  All you are getting is a bunch of English words that cannot be read or understood. 

          Instead of using software, you need English lessons.  You need to learn from another person or from a class how to speak and write English.  Until you do that, your articles will continue to be rejected.


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