I'd like feedback on my article:5 Effective Tips to Solve Interpersona

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   Moon620posted 4 years ago

   Hello friends,
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: https://hubpages.com/health/interpersonal-relationship
   
   5 Effective Tips to Solve Interpersonal Problems in Curing Depression

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there.
      
      Some suggestions:
      
      Add an article bio which states your qualifications in the topic.
      
      Make sure your images are credited properly. If they are yours, then put your name in the source box. Otherwise they must be Creative Commons licensed or Wiki Commons. If possible put a live link to the source. You can't use images straight from the web without permission or the above licenses.
      
      Your title is a little unwieldy - solving and curing. I would say something like 5 Tips to Deal with Depression Caused by Interpersonal Problems.
      
      Are you sure you want to define depression as a 'brain disease'? It's mental illness, not really a disease.
      
      And this: "Like the other ten diseases." Not sure what you are referring to?
      
      Address the vagueness, for example, "Each of us has special characteristics to maintain emotional communication with others. This type of communication feature is very important."
      
      What special characteristics? What communication feature? You have to be concise and precise. Go through your article carefully and with each sentence ask yourself if you are communicating an idea clearly.
      
      Make sure your recommendations are actual concrete steps that your readers understand and can implement in their life. Again, no vagueness.
      
      Add question marks where you are asking questions, here, for instance: "what kind of situation, what is your emotional response to words or actions..."
      
      The quiz or poll or whatever it is, is blank for me. Just a big white space.
      
      Remove the periods/full stops from the subheadings.
      
      Add authoritative references/studies (links) at the end which back up your recommendations.
      
      Good luck.

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         Moon620posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for your feedback.

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