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HI could use some constructive comments !

  1. mountainmama profile image54
    mountainmamaposted 7 years ago

    Hi all, i am a newby, have been here about 3 weeks and posted a few hubs, and would love some comments to see if i am on the right track. 
    i havent wanted to invite any family or friends to read my stuff yet, as i am writing to get my esteem and abilities up to snuff.  It's easier to ask a stranger!  Please check out my latest or any of mine!  Thanks!  Mountainmama

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Child-Athletes- … or-College

    1. AEvans profile image80
      AEvansposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I read, commented and replied. smile

      1. Mikel G Roberts profile image81
        Mikel G Robertsposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Me too (and you can delete the comment later if you want)

  2. Cagsil profile image60
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    I would recommend that you use more text capsules. Even possibly put in Amazon capsule somewhere, possibly related to sports.

    Your hub looks like it was written in one capsule and in doing this, you lose ad space which occurs from multiple capsules. smile

    1. mountainmama profile image54
      mountainmamaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thanks, a great idea!  i haven't used separate text capsules in any of my hubs yet, ill try it!  mountainmama

 
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