How can i improve this article? Need your advice

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   rumanasaiyedposted 3 years ago

   https://discover.hubpages.com/health/PR … -pregnancy

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      OldRosesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I agree with Rupert.  This is a blog entry.  I would say a diary entry.
      HubPages is looking for magazine style articles of about 1,000 words on topics that readers are searching on.
      
      You have to be very careful when writing about medical topics.  You need to supply your sources.  It's not enough that your doctor told you something.  It has to be a professional, peer reviewed source.
      
      You need to also make clear what your qualifications are to write on a medical topic.  It's not enough to just talk about something you went through personally.  That's a blog. 
      
      And be very, very careful about photos.  You can only use photos that are your own or are licensed for free use.  https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use
      
      You need to spend some time studying the articles in the Learning Center.  They will tell you everything you need to know to write on this platform.  https://hubpageshelp.com/

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      Amara Hassanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Rumana,
      Along with other issues Oldroses and Rupert mentioned, your article is very short, and it looks like a blog post.

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         rumanasaiyedposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Yes, I agree with that.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 3 years ago

   There are several grammar issues, such as the use of its when it should be it is or it's. Never use the lower case "i' for the personal pronoun. Try using a program such as Grammarly to catch errors. It's free.
   
   The image you have used is watermarked and that means it's protected by copyright, meaning you must pay the owner for its use.
   
   The piece is more of a personal blog than a magazine-style article and HubPages is not a blogging platform.

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      rumanasaiyedposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Noted Taylor...

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   rumanasaiyedposted 3 years ago

   I will surely pay attention to your advice. Thanks a lot OldRoses

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Hi Rumana,
   I can't see your bio, which is necessary to gain the reader's trust. You must include bibliographic or web references. There is no disclaimer notice at the end of your article, as far as I can see. You must include it. You can find copyright-free images on Pexels, Pixabay, Wikimedia Commons, and Unsplash.
   Best wishes to you!!

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      rumanasaiyedposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you misbah for your valuable comments.

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   gameloopmobiposted 3 years ago

   Thank you misbah for your valuable comments.

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