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Hi there,
I feel qualified to make suggestions for this as I home educated my two from birth until they went to college
1. Move the quotation down the page.
2. Use real photos and cite the source. Try Pixabay or Unsplash. Make sure to link back to the original. It's better to use your own photos for a topic like this.
3. Get rid of words like 'eruidation'. That'll put people right off
4. Keep your subheading short and with no full stop/period at the end.
5. Change your bold list headings into proper subheadings using multiple text capsules. You can put a few sections into one capsule and still use H2 headings by highlighting and clicking on the 'Paragraph' drop-down.
6. Don't use exclamation marks. They look unprofessional.
7. Remove the bit about "The main problem that arises with homeschooling is lack of socialising." I found the opposite to be true, so address it more directly, like "Parents worry about the lack of socialisation, but remember that your children are mixing with other people every time you meet with other families, go on trips, and shopping. The difference is, they are interacting with people of all ages...yadda..."
8. Don't forget to mention the many home-ed groups that are available. Also, you could mention such websites as Education Otherwise.
9. Remove the Wikipedia reference.
In case you are interested, my eldest is now a college lecturer himself and my daughter is taking a year out of uni to do a paid internship for a record label I have two articles on home-ed on my profile, that might help you with your layout and formatting.
Good luck with your article... and with your home schooling.
Hey, thanks for the suggestions. I didn't see the option of multiple capsules
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