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  1. Iwriter1 profile image86
    Iwriter1posted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I hope everything is going well for you all. I need assistance in improving one of my hubs that was published on Hubpages. Here is the link for my article:
    When and Why you should write a personal note
    I am looking forward to receiving some positive suggestions.
    Thanks
    Sourav

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    1. WriterJanis profile image90
      WriterJanisposted 8 months agoin reply to this

      HI Sourav,
      A couple of suggestions. You need to properly credit your images including a link back to the original photo. I also suggest you clean up the white space in your articles. Hope this is helpful.

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      1. Iwriter1 profile image86
        Iwriter1posted 8 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your kind suggestions. Yes, it's important to properly credit the images.  However, I have included the names of the sources.

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        1. WriterJanis profile image90
          WriterJanisposted 8 months agoin reply to this

          Yes, you have included your sources, but not the name of the photographer of the source or a link to the original photograph. You should also site the licensing.

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  2. Gregory DeVictor profile image96
    Gregory DeVictorposted 8 months ago

    In your title, the word "and" does not have to be capitalized.

    I strongly suggest that you thoroughly review the "HubPages Writing Style Guide." According to HP, "This guide covers most aspects of writing and formatting online articles created via the HubPages platform."

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    1. Iwriter1 profile image86
      Iwriter1posted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your helpful comments, Gregory. Yes, it does not need to be capitalized.

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  3. AliciaC profile image94
    AliciaCposted 8 months ago

    I think you need to be careful in your phrasing. Underneath the picture of “Why,” you have some points that are good for the person expressing the sympathy. If you feel the need to include these, I think they should be in a separate section so as not to give an impression of insincerity.

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    1. Iwriter1 profile image86
      Iwriter1posted 8 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your kind feedback Alicia. Can you please give a few examples of my improper wording in this article? It will be helpful for me to identify the issues. The points under picture why are given in a different capsule.

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