I'd like feedback on my article: Top Tips: How to Build Better Relationships -..

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   Suraj Kumar Muluposted 2 weeks ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Top Tips: How to Build Better Relationships - Part I

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      Kenna McHughposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      The link doesn't work.

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      WriterJanisposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      I also tried the link and it goes to an error page.

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      In your title, you do not need to have "TOP TIPS" all in uppercase letters. "Top Tips" will suffice. In addition, the preposition "To" in your title does not need to be capitalized.
      
      I cannot offer any other suggestions at this time because it looks like you are editing your article.

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      HubPages requires that an article be written in "near perfect English." As it currently stands, your article is full of grammatical and spelling errors, as well as numerous sentence structure issues. For example, a sentence must always end with a period, a question mark, or an exclamation point. I noticed that you have not added the proper "end marks" to some of your sentences.
      
      All things considered, I believe that you need to spend lots of quality time at HubPages' Learning Center before writing any more articles. At the Learning Center, you will find many of the necessary tools that are critical in creating a successful article.
      
      You also need to know that HubPages strictly forbids articles that contain AI-generated content. Unfortunately, we've been seeing more and more of this "shady" practice recently on the HP site.

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         theraggededgeposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

         How are you able to see it, Gregory? I can't see it on the OP's profile or activity stream. And the URL leads to a 404 error.

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            WriterJanisposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

            I tried again too, Bev, but I'm also still getting the 404 error.

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            Gregory DeVictorposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

            Hello Bev! I tried a number of times to view the article, but received an error message like you did except for two times.
            
            I made the comment about the title after I saw the article for the first time. After that, I kept getting error messages.
            
            Then, hours later, I viewed the article for a second time and took some notes regarding the issues in the article.  When I went back to get some further details, I started to get the error messages again.
            
            Bev, do you think that these error messages could be an internal issue with HP? Or, does the author keep publishing and unpublishing the article?

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               theraggededgeposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

               Could be either. It's a bit strange as the original post was generated from a HubPages email link so should be available for us to see.

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      Gregory DeVictorposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Suraj, have you been publishing and unpublishing this article? There are at least three writers here (Bev, Kenna, and I) who would like to help you, but we can't until you keep the article published.

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         Suraj Kumar Muluposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

         I think this is a glitch with HP , all my articles suddenly started showing "needs editing" . All my articles are now unpublished. And I can't find the actual reason behind it. If you have any solution please reply back. And thanks for the feedback in title ☺️

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            theraggededgeposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

            Have you used Chat GPT to write your articles at all? Because you cannot use it here.
            
            What you can use AI for is grammatical errors. Grammarly and Hemingway can help. For instance, in your post above you are placing unnecessary spaces before your commas.
            
            Of course, as I can't see it, I'm merely guessing at possible issues.

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