I'd like feedback on my article: Heart and It Feeling

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  1. Syeda Maha profile image66
    Syeda Mahaposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Heart and It Feeling

  2. psycheskinner profile image83
    psycheskinnerposted 3 years ago

    Sorry, but our text really doesn't make a lot of sense.  For example "Science proves that the strongest heart in the world is the heart."


  3. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

    This bit is extremely puzzling?


  4. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

    Syeda, you have copied more text in your other articles. You have to delete it. I found someone who copied my articles and sent a demand for payment for unauthorised use (and they paid it). It's illegal to steal work that is copyrighted (owned) by someone else. You could face legal action.

    Your 'happiness' article has been copied from Lifehack. You will be banned from HubPages if you keep doing it.

  5. AliciaC profile image93
    AliciaCposted 3 years ago

    Syeda, please pay close attention to what theraggededge has said. You mustn’t copy passages from another site. If you keep on doing it, I doubt whether you will be allowed to write here much longer.

    Every part of your article must be related to your topic. A poll about countries and a table about the HubPages staff has nothing to do with your theme of the heart and its symbolic meaning.

    There’s a grammatical error in your title. Photos must have a suitable license for use on HubPages. I suggest that your explore the Learning Center before you write any new articles.

    If you know that you’ve done something unacceptable in one of your previous articles, you should edit it very soon.

  6. FatFreddysCat profile image94
    FatFreddysCatposted 3 years ago

    It's short, and it's gibberish. Delete, destroy.

  7. Abby Slutsky profile image92
    Abby Slutskyposted 3 years ago

    There is a lot of work to do for this article to be up to par. Here are my suggestions:
    1. It needs to be at least 750 words or close to it.
    2. Your title needs the word 'Its' not 'It'
    3. There are items in the end of the article, such as the vote, that have nothing to do with the topic.
    4. You have sentences about what the heart does, but you do not qualify as an expert to say them.
    Good luck. I hope this is helpful.

  8. Syeda Maha profile image66
    Syeda Mahaposted 3 years ago

    Hi, thanks for the suggestions, but can you please contact me personally?
    I'm new here, but many people dis hearted me, but the way you give me suggestions are lovely.


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