I have just published my first hub and if your interested i would like people to have a look and comment on what they think and how they believe it could be improved? im trying to learn quickly as this is all new to me. If you do like then please follow.
Since you are new you might now know but you are not allowed to post threads asking for people to look and comment on them.
You can post in the Extreme Hub Makeover forum and ask for advice.
I already reported the thread for being in the wrong category. HubPages admin should be able to move this to the correct category.
He's not allowed to link. But as it's only one hub, I'm sure anyone can go to his profile and read it.
Hello and welcome to Hubpages!
I hope you enjoy your time here!
Some of your intro stuff would be great as a profile page bio. I'd also break up that big block of text into smaller paras (easier to read online).
WELCOME! It's nice here.
Btw- Welcome to HubPages.
Here is the link for your hub:
The reason I have posted it is because this should be in the Extreme Hub Makeover Forum thread, but as you've read in my previous post, I have reported to HubPages Staff and hopefully they will move it for you.
The other reason is because when in the Extreme Hub Makeover thread, you can post links to your hubs that you want critiqued. It is one of the places where your link will not get snipped by admin.
There was nothing to snip in this thread.
now, thanks to you ,there is !
You're funny. Learn the rules of HubPages before you run off at the mouth.
HubPages CANNOT snip the link I provide, and had you known the rules...then you wouldn't have said what you did.
Or were you simply trying to bait me into an argument. Thus, would make you no better than the trolls of HubPages.
Either way, have a great day!
got ya, i will try and do this now ha im not to clued up with all this yet but getting there so thank you for your time
As for the critique aspect of your hub.
I would say that you need to "paragraph" your writing. It's all bunched together and you cannot expect people to simply read it, as it is now.
I would highly suggest using more text capsules and put in a couple of picture capsules(related to the topic) next to some of your text capsules. If you need to learn more about the use of capsules, then click on hubbers, enter in the search box "capsules" and get the results of some of the better hubbers you have made hubs dedicated to it.
*(a) you can put in a news thread if there is news on the subject.
*(b) you can put a poll in asking a specific question, such as...did you enjoy the hub? Just to get interaction from your reader.
*(c) you can use or upload videos related to your topic.
So, that's about all I have for you. Hope I was helpful.
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