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  1. Colinholland profile image50
    Colinhollandposted 8 years ago

    Hi all,
    I have just published my first hub and if your interested i would like people to have a look and comment on what they think and how they believe it could be improved? im trying to learn quickly as this is all new to me. If you do like then please follow.
    many thanks

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image82
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    Since you are new you might now know but you are not allowed to post threads asking for people to look and comment on them.

    You can post in the Extreme Hub Makeover forum and ask for advice.

    1. Cagsil profile image81
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I already reported the thread for being in the wrong category. HubPages admin should be able to move this to the correct category.

    2. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      He's not allowed to link. But as it's only one hub, I'm sure anyone can go to his profile and read it.

    3. Colinholland profile image50
      Colinhollandposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      right that was lesson 1 then  thank you

  3. profile image0
    StormRyderposted 8 years ago

    Hello and welcome to Hubpages! smile
    I hope you enjoy your time here! big_smile

    1. Colinholland profile image50
      Colinhollandposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      thanks

  4. tantrum profile image61
    tantrumposted 8 years ago

    A BIG WELCOME ! big_smile

    1. Colinholland profile image50
      Colinhollandposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      thanks

      1. tantrum profile image61
        tantrumposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Hope you find your way on here !

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    Audreveaposted 8 years ago

    Some of your intro stuff would be great as a profile page bio. I'd also break up that big block of text into smaller paras (easier to read online).

    WELCOME! smile It's nice here.

  6. Cagsil profile image81
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    Btw- Welcome to HubPages.

    Here is the link for your hub:
    http://hubpages.com/hub/chinesewhispers

    The reason I have posted it is because this should be in the Extreme Hub Makeover Forum thread, but as you've read in my previous post, I have reported to HubPages Staff and hopefully they will move it for you.

    The other reason is because when in the Extreme Hub Makeover thread, you can post links to your hubs that you want critiqued. It is one of the places where your link will not get snipped by admin.

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      There was nothing to snip in this thread.
      now, thanks to you ,there is !

      1. Cagsil profile image81
        Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        You're funny. Learn the rules of HubPages before you run off at the mouth.

        HubPages CANNOT snip the link I provide, and had you known the rules...then you wouldn't have said what you did.

        Or were you simply trying to bait me into an argument. Thus, would make you no better than the trolls of HubPages.

        Either way, have a great day!

    2. Colinholland profile image50
      Colinhollandposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      got ya, i will try and do this now ha im not to clued up with all this yet but getting there so thank you for your time

  7. Cagsil profile image81
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    As for the critique aspect of your hub.

    I would say that you need to "paragraph" your writing. It's all bunched together and you cannot expect people to simply read it, as it is now.

    I would highly suggest using more text capsules and put in a couple of picture capsules(related to the topic) next to some of your text capsules. If you need to learn more about the use of capsules, then click on hubbers, enter in the search box "capsules" and get the results of some of the better hubbers you have made hubs dedicated to it.

    *(a) you can put in a news thread if there is news on the subject.
    *(b) you can put a poll in asking a specific question, such as...did you enjoy the hub? Just to get interaction from your reader.
    *(c) you can use or upload videos related to your topic.

    So, that's about all I have for you. Hope I was helpful. smile

    1. Colinholland profile image50
      Colinhollandposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      thats great more then enough for me to be getting on with. many thanks for your help

      1. Cagsil profile image81
        Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        You're Welcome. smile

 
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