Review

  1. Moses Okocha profile image58
    Moses Okochaposted 7 years ago

    Please can anyone help to review my first hub, i'm new and i want to know if i have potential or I'm a looser.

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    Website Examinerposted 7 years ago

    I think you have a winner. It is very interesting and useful information that you are providing, and the idea of announcing what will come next is a good one.

    A couple of things: You need to proofread this hub carefully, there are a number of errors. Also, try to avoid using the same/very similar words repeatedly right after one another. You can trim down the language a bit and get a more fluent writing style that way.

 
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