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   Ben Peckposted 13 years ago

   I have just finished this hub. It is not my normal style or topic, I just pick a topic out of the hat, and had a stab at it.I am sick of poker article's and the whole poker scene. so I am trying new things. I do not plan on following this subject.
   
   Any view will be helpful.
   
   So feel free to release the rain.
   
   
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/DIETING-some-good-advice

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   ryankettposted 13 years ago

   For SEO purposes it would make much more sense to use the preset formatting options 'Header 2', 'Header 3', for your subtitles.... rather than your current underlined paragraph text.
   
   A photo of some sort will help with internal search results, at current people just get a picture of your face. Do this by breaking your text into two text capsules, and putting the photo adjacent to the second. This way that nice ad block at the top will remain in place.
   
   I don't really understand why you have used an indent, but I suppose that is personal taste.
   
   You can put two Amazon capsules side by side, thus allowing six products in the space that you have used for three. I dont understand why there is a large gap between your text and your amazon capsules.
   
   An RSS feed or news capsule will help prolong the life of your hub. Your title is not keyword optimised (see the Google Keyword Tool), your tagging could be better. I have some links in this hub.....
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/My-Hubpages-AdS … -Disclosed
   
   At the bottom, to two hubs about tagging. One of those hubs, the one by Darkside, will teach you a bit about keywords.

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      Ben Peckposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, that's a lot of good advice, much appreciated. I will get straight on it.
      This advice is good for all hubs yes?
      
      Can I use photos from any royalty free site? Or do I have to purchase them.

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         ryankettposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         http://hubpages.com/hub/royalty-free-stock-photos

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            Ben Peckposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            I have already made the cosmetic changes, and you was spot on, big improvement,
            
            Thanks mate,

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               ryankettposted 13 years agoin reply to this

               You see those Amazon capsules?
               
               Go to edit your hub, press the right pointing arrow on the bottom Amazon capsule.... and then press the up arrow.... and merge those two capsules together....
               
               If you have no idea what I am talking about, then visit my hub here http://hubpages.com/hub/Kindle-For-iPad-Application
               
               See how my two amazon items are horizontel instead of vertical?

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                  Ben Peckposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                  Nice one. hows the photo position?

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                     ryankettposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                     It all looks a lot better than it did when you started.

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                        Ben Peckposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                        Thanks for all the help Ryan.
                        Just those pesky keywords to get to grips with now.
                        This could take awhile.

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   earnestshubposted 13 years ago

   I had a look too Ben, and watched it change. I knew you were in good hands! Very nicely done Ryankett!

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