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how to write a song

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    helpgirlposted 7 years ago

    hi hub pages today i am here to teach you how to to write a song. look in side you and see what you feel. like if you have a crush on a boy/girl then you write for what you like about them. i wrote a song to show you what i mean. so here it is.

    i like it when he smiles, i can here my heart pound from a mile,can't he hear me not breathwhen i'm with him. can't he tell i'm intrested. don't he know how to treat a girl right oh yeah. when i'm on stage i feel my heart pound like when i'm with him. i then i say i like to the way he smiles. he said this is the start of a begining.

    look in your self and what your heart says is what should do is what you should do

  2. dakota ray profile image53
    dakota rayposted 7 years ago

    ok thank you very very much

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      Uma07posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      You are a fast learner dakota ray. big_smile

      1. thooghun profile image82
        thooghunposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        What heartfelt extravagant praise!

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      helpgirlposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      your welcome doka ray

  3. thooghun profile image82
    thooghunposted 7 years ago

    Thank you Maestro! I will follow your advice:

    (P.S) "The start of a beginning" is a little redundant!

    Inside my alabaster cave,
    The back is sore, my gaze is blank,
    Oh when oh when will it Google rank?
    More bookmarking will follow...

    My Adsense page reveals no change,
    Google, Bing and Yahoo all,
    Cruelly don't accept my call,
    More bookmarking will follow...

    Within a torrent of comment spam, 
    I wonder when the tides will rage,
    To smile once more -- my income gage!
    More bookmarking will follow...

    Alone once more with my modules,
    Google's betrayal sparks a lover's sigh,
    The sun falls low beneath a fiery sky,
    More bookmarking will follow....


  4. heart4theword profile image80
    heart4thewordposted 7 years ago

    Do you ever write a song, paced by a 3/4 or 4/4 beat?  I have a song that was put on my heart, in words with a tune.  The words are very meaningful to me, yet I need to find someone to write some better music, some music that is not redundant.

    Would you or any others know? How to go about finding someone, who is in the market of writing music for words, to be made into songs:)

    What about getting paid for words, without music, to be made into a song?

    1. sofs profile image84
      sofsposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Those replying to helpgirl please check this thread  too

      1. bayoulady profile image70
        bayouladyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        They definitely NEED to read. This"girl" is having herself at the expense of good hearted people. (..and yes...blush..I fell for it at first...the teacher in me who wanted to "reach out"..

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          anna1234posted 7 years agoin reply to this

          thanks i am entering a contest with a song i have to write and this will work for me

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