Have time for another critique?

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  1. Rose Mari profile image68
    Rose Mariposted 7 years ago

    I've just published these two hubs

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Squinkies-Buy-S … oys-Online

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Zoobles-Buy-Zoo … tat-Online

    Would love a critique. While I have written at hubpages under another id, I am starting out fresh with this id. I feel like I have improved since I started out with the other id, but I know my hubs could use some help.

    Thanks guys!

  2. SteveoMc profile image73
    SteveoMcposted 7 years ago

    I just read the squinkies hub.  It looks fine to me.   I will never buy a squinky.   But if I decided I would, this would have given me a sense of urgency to act now or be locked out in the cold.   Well done.!

  3. Shadesbreath profile image84
    Shadesbreathposted 7 years ago

    I red the Zoobles one.  Seems like it ought to make money if those toys get popular.  Good luck.

  4. I am DB Cooper profile image64
    I am DB Cooperposted 7 years ago

    I've never heard of either one, but you've got 2 very well put together hubs.

  5. lrohner profile image80
    lrohnerposted 7 years ago

    Nice work!

    On the both hubs, I see a horizontal bar of AdSense ads, a horizontal row of Amazon ads and then another horizontal row of AdSense ads. On my monitor, I don't even see any of your text, so I know that I'd be outta there quickly before reading anything you wrote. Maybe you can turn AdSense down from high to medium or low?

    I would also add a little blurb like you did on the Zoobles hub about what Squinkies are, just in case someone hasn't heard of them but migrates there from your other hubs.

  6. Rose Mari profile image68
    Rose Mariposted 7 years ago

    lrohner - yeah, I know you don't see any text. I am not sure how well this layout will convert. I have seen other hubs using it and thought that this one might be a good one to try it on. Simply because I think that most people who will be searching for these products will be looking to buy them, not so much read about them.

    I added the Squinkies blurb to the Zoobles hub. Thanks for the heads up

    I wonder if anyone has any experience using a layout like this with the 2 amazon modules at the top?

    DB Cooper - thanks for the feedback!
    Shadesbreath - awesome, that is what I'm working for wink
    Steveomc - good to hear

  7. wilderness profile image97
    wildernessposted 7 years ago

    My only complaint was the same as Irohners - too many ads at the top.

    I thought it really well written, though - you did a good job of advertising.

 
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