Going green. What do you think?

1. 42

   Mikeydoesposted 14 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/hub/Why-should-businesses-go-green
   
   I am going to begin backlinking this, I plan on revising a couple things to really spiffy it up.

   replyreport
   1. 61

      lady_love158posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I think when the President talks about the "Green Economy" he's talking about all the money he and his friends are going to make by pushing his agenda upon the tax payers!

      replyreport
   2. 42

      Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I edited what do you think now?

      replyreport
      1. 87

         rebekahELLEposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         It looks pretty good and is very interesting. I would go through each text capsule one more time for a spell check. And make sure no words are run together.
         
         at the end, I would wrap it up in a few sentences encouraging your readers to get involved and remind them of a few of the benefits you covered. I would encourage them to watch the video as it really does help show what the company does.
         
         it's a good topic of which you could write more hubs in relation to going green and then you can link your hubs together. 
         
         I also left a comment on the hub. good info.

         replyreport
         1. 42

            Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            thank you so much! I should be getting quite a bit of traffic here, hopefully I can make it explode.
            
            I currently am working on a global warming that talks about switching to recycling. It is up right now, but I am still working on both as it does take time.
            
            Also should i put comments further up, or the poll further up?
            
            Oh and should iIget on Kontera(sp?). Currently I am only using adsense.

            replyreport
2. 72

   SteveoMcposted 14 years ago

   You are allowed to post a link to a hub on Extreme Hub Makeover.   As a matter of fact, it is common courtesy to post the link to the hub that you wish to have feedback on.   
   
   This forum is a place you can ask for feedback... and, wonder of wonders, include a link to the hub in question without fear of snipping!
   
   All links in this forum are nofollowed.  Spam and affiliate links are obviously still no-go.
   
   Have fun, and be constructive...

   replyreport
   1. 42

      Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback?

      replyreport
      1. 74

         sofsposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         OOps! sorry , didn't realise that this is in extreme makeover!!

         replyreport
      2. 75

         WryLiltposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Mikey, Steve merely quoted the rules written at the top of the Extreme Hub Makeover forum - the only forum where you can link to your own hubs.
         
         And as for feedback?
         ►Why is your email there? It opens your email address for spammers to scrape.... and it looks tacky.... and if someone really wants to contact you they can either leave a comment OR visit your profile and click Contact MikeyDoes.
         ►Take out the links to other people's hubs. It looks over promotional and will also send visitors to other people's hubs instead of them clicking adverts in yours.
         ►Move the video down beside the second text capsule so that the adsense block can go in prime clicking territory - top right.
         ►Add some more media - maybe a picture, poll, some links to sites people can read more info if they want (but not too many links and keep them in the bottom half.)
         ►What is Intercon? Do you work for them? It sounds like you're trying to sell something, sorry. And if you are trying to talk about them - whynot have a link to their website if they have one.
         ►Otherwise not a bad hub. Do you know if it has any good keywords?

         replyreport
         1. 42

            Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            The email is staying as I haven't gotten spam in fact the one email I got was actually huge for me. I want to make myself available, currently unemployed.
            
            Everything else was very helpful, not that I don't agree that it is tacky. I am on a crappy iPod so editing isn't happening for a couple days until I get to a computer. I will leave the email there I think, and see how it works out for me.
            
            I do have 1 keyword that will be a huge winner, just like Intercon will be. They are pretty much tops when it comes to going green, which is a huge topic for many people.
            
            Is there something I'm supposed to do with the keyword? I have it on keywords and I have it in the article several times.

            replyreport
            1. 75

               WryLiltposted 14 years agoin reply to this

               It's best to put your keyword or words in the title and/or URL.
               
               And the tags - is that what you mean by having it in keywords?
               
               Remember - you can use multiple keywords and rank for all of them. It does of course take time...

               replyreport
      3. 72

         SteveoMcposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         I suppose I should have explained myself a little more.   Someone told you that you cannot post links to your hubs.   I just wanted to set the record straight so that you wouldn't worry about it.   
         I thought that it was great feedback to let you know that you had done nothing wrong.   And then I simply quoted the top of the forum note.

         replyreport
         1. 42

            Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

            I wasn't directing that at you or the other poster, I appreciate what you said. I just was wanting feedback.

            replyreport
3. 74

   sofsposted 14 years ago

   Your hub is well written, the flow is good.
   
   I just want to draw your attention to one fact that I noticed in your hub
   The very first line is a link to another hubber's hub. This will take your reader away from your page right at the start and they may not come back to finish the hub.
   Keep the links to the end of your hub so that the reader has become interested in what you have to say.
   
   Adding some more examples to the discussion under the last header  would strengthen your argument and give more weight to what you are saying.
   I am not so experienced here but thought I will share what I know!
   Best wishes and keep writing more hubs!

   replyreport
   1. 42

      Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Ty, but you did scare me for a sec haha. I am going to execute yours and her advice in a couple days.
      
      Once again thanks to the both of you.

      replyreport
      1. 74

         sofsposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         Sorry, once again, cross my heart!

         replyreport
4. 61

   wilsonallen01posted 14 years ago

   I will definitely try to do this..

   replyreport
5. 60

   saleheensblogposted 14 years ago

   your keyword selection has been poor, work on it.

   replyreport
6. 82

   habeeposted 14 years ago

   I was green once, while deep sea fishing off the coast of Savannah.

   replyreport
7. 42

   Mikeydoesposted 14 years ago

   Is it okay to put their contact information down as in phone number and address? Incase people want to recycle Ewaste right away? Can I also give a name of a person that I know and trust to deal with?

   replyreport
8. 55

   ftclickposted 14 years ago

   I was an Obama backer but now, jeez.. he is Otaxa. and now s approving the text-tapping the NSA wants. is this better than Bush. well,the republicans messed up with getting Palin in to drop McCain's chances.

   replyreport
   1. 42

      Mikeydoesposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      wrong thread.
      
      Anyone have any idea if I can add contact info to my site. It will allow people to instantly get ahold of intercon and start recycling?

      replyreport