I joined Hubpages a few weeks ago but haven't published a hub until now. If any of you wouldn't mind taking a quick glance at it and giving me any suggestions it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Read success stories of Hubpages. You can learn more about writing best hubs
Hey HauserQ - welcome to HubPages
Your hub is, by and large - fine. It's a great first effort and what it lacks is you to go back and review/edit. You've got a few grammar/spelling mistakes that interrupt the flow of the text.
You could do with 'best nerf guns' being inserted into the text a few more times. 'this is why it's one of the best nerf guns' - 'this is one of the best nerf guns because ... ' kind of thing.
Don't go nuts though - a few naturally occurring repetitions of your keyword will suffice. Tags - you could choose better ones. Use one's that directly relate to your keyword - rather than generics that don't fit with the keyword - such as 'kids toys'.
buy a nerf gun, buy nerf, buy nerf guns, buy nerf guns online, best nerf guns to buy, best nerf gun, cheap nerf guns, cheapest nerf gun, cool nerf guns - etc.
And add something to your profile. Nothing too explanatory - just who you are, that you review products or some such. Makes you more user friendly.
Hope that helps
Thanks chemicalengineeri for the tip and thank you frogdropping for the thorough critiquing! I really appreciate it and made changes based on your suggestions.
by lillm 7 years ago
Hello!I just joined Hubpages a few days ago. I've produced a few hubs at this point, and I'd like to know if I'm on the right track. I can already say that my use of pictures needs some work - I'm still doing some research on how to find them legally. Any and all comments/critiques/suggestions are...
by Travis Wakeman 4 years ago
In terms of philosophy or theology something like this:X is a mistaken position for reasons A,B,C. This Hub is an example of that position, lets do a point by point dissection of it (while not infringing on copyright) while pointing out the problems in their reasoning.Is that doable? Will it get...
by sandra rinck 9 years ago
I am doing a hubpages christmas catalog and I need some suggestions on how to make it more functional. http://hubpages.com/hub/Christmas-Catalog-on-HubpagesBe harsh in a nice way if you need to just as long as I can get it to be the best it can be. Thanks,Sandra
by Tips Planet 8 years ago
Hi Fellow Hubbers,I am new here and started 2 hubs. One is about Antivirus and other is about Wall papers. Could you please go through and give me your valuable feedback?Thanks,Ramesh.
by Adele Cosgrove-Bray 8 years ago
Having been here for fifteen months now, I've yet to receive my first cheque from Adsence or Amazon. Just this morning, thanks to advice in a Hub written by the Bard of Ely, I altered the layout of my Hubs so that they no longer began with an image or video. Here's hoping this improves...
by money-man 8 years ago
Feedback about my hub, Compare checking accounts online is needed. Please do not post critiques in the comment section of the hub. I'd rather read the critiques here, in this forum.Thanks for your help!
Copyright © 2018 HubPages Inc. and respective owners. Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners. HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc. HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.
|HubPages Device ID||This is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.|
|Login||This is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.|
|HubPages Traffic Pixel||This is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.|
|Remarketing Pixels||We may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.|
|Conversion Tracking Pixels||We may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.|