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Need Professional Feedback!

  1. xrocker30 profile image77
    xrocker30posted 6 years ago


    I just wrote a hub on the History of Chewing Gum and made it one of my higher quality hubs. I put a lot of time and effort into it and would like some feedback about the keywords I chose, the content, and any other things worth mentioning. Thanks


  2. lrohner profile image82
    lrohnerposted 6 years ago

    Really great information! It's obvious you put a lot of thought and research into this hub.

    I think you did really well on your keyword research. "Chewing gum history" has more searches, but also more competition. That is, I assume your keyword is "History of Chewing Gum." I say that because if that is your keyword (and it should be), you didn't use it anywhere else in your hub. You should have it a couple of times in your text, in a capsule title and, well, I think SunForged has a really good hub on on-page optimization. Check it out here: http://hubpages.com/hub/Get-traffic-with-ON-PAGE-seo

    The only other criticism I have is on grammar, spelling and punctuation. But then, don't mind me. I'm just pretty picky about this stuff, and I doubt the average reader is.

    So again, welcome to HP and great start!

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      ryankettposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I don't think that Grammar is important, but spelling is a must! Especially when Hubpages integrates a spell checker wink My grammar is sloppy, I can do it, but I work too fast. But, I never fail to spellcheck smile

      1. lrohner profile image82
        lrohnerposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Ack! I'm never gonna live down that "sloppy" comment, am I?

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          ryankettposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Your missing the best thread on the site, by the way smile