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  1. wizbitz profile image59
    wizbitzposted 7 years ago

    please comment also on my other hubs, thanks

    I will appreciate any suggestions, mainly on the photos am I using too much photos?

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    Website Examinerposted 7 years ago

    Looks good, that one. I like the way you used photos to illustrate each product.

    1. wizbitz profile image59
      wizbitzposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks, I really did put some time in arranging those

  3. Maembe profile image60
    Maembeposted 7 years ago

    You really need to spend more time on your hubs.  There are a lot of grammatical mistakes and the writing is just plain bad.  Sorry to be so blunt, but it looks like you wrote that in 10 minutes.

    1. wizbitz profile image59
      wizbitzposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Really, can you help me by pointing that out?
      Is it just on my free software article?
      thanks, I appreciate it...It is good to know what I am lacking.

  4. wilderness profile image97
    wildernessposted 7 years ago

    The only real suggestion I might make is to write an introduction capsule.  Right now the first photo is taking the prime ad space at the top right of the hub.

    Adding an intro capsule (that is long enough) will move that first ad into the right of the first capsule.

    1. wizbitz profile image59
      wizbitzposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I'll think of a good introduction while adding more content to my article. THANKS!!

      1. wilderness profile image97
        wildernessposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        You are welcome.  Just use the preview function to make sure the new intro is long enough to move the ad into that space.

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    lynnechandlerposted 7 years ago

    With this particular hub there are certain things that are missing like proper capitalization right at the beginning. But the thing that struck me most was the herky jerky rhythm to the hub.

    What the heck is she talking about? I'm glad you asked, lol. No seriously, it is almost like you want to be all technical at times and then it falls to a more familiar personal tone and that jerks the reader around a bit. Of course this is just my 2 cents worth.

    Welcome to hubpages! Keep writing and working on the hubs!

    1. wizbitz profile image59
      wizbitzposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I saw the capitalization thing, missed it ^ ^...thanks
      ...hmm you have a point there, I'll see if I can improve the "rhythm" of the hubs.Thanks, good to know that I still have a lot to improve in my writing.


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