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    Storyteller88posted 6 years ago

    Looking for some criticism on this story. I have posted the first chapter and will be posting the next one this week. Please feel free to comment Thank You:)

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    Website Examinerposted 6 years ago

    I have asked the moderators to move this thread to the Extreme Hub Makover forum, which is where it belongs.

    Here is a link to your hub, in case someone wants to comment: