http://hubpages.com/hub/Call-of-Duty-7- … s-HQ-Guide and http://hubpages.com/hub/Unpaid-Internsh … y-worth-it
These two hubs are the two I feel need some improving yet I can not think how!
Please reply with some help
Thanks in Advance,
B A N K A I guy
Checked the Internship one.
1) Too short
2) Not enough points made. You didn't list the pros and cons, not analyze them. You just say "there is no immediate financial gain" and left it at that.
3) You have a conclusion, but you provided very little evidence to supprot your conclusion.
The first hub needs work. Changing the format would be better. the poll in the beginning looks bad. Too many keywords, which might get you flagged for excessive keywords.
The second hub is way too short in content, so adding content would be better. Expand on what you're already talking about. There are not enough keywords on this hub.
Visit the Learning Center to get a better idea of "What is a Hub"?
1, make the first hub easier to read and understand
2, add some video to each of the hubs
3, add some more length, probably another 100-200 words, to the second hub
1) Google images is not a source, it is a search engine. Otherwise... not a subject I know much about.
2) Not sure I follow the logic that unpaid is somehow better than paid.
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