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  1. Silent Sinner profile image57
    Silent Sinnerposted 6 years ago

    http://silentsinner.hubpages.com/hub/Th … Changed-Me
    Would love advice or criticism . Honesty being the best policy ,positive or negative replies are appreciated!

    1. AEvans profile image66
      AEvansposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      I just read your story about your near death experience on the back of the crotch rocket.


      First I am glad you are alive and we should always go with our instinct. smile


      Second: Use spell check on the capsule and you will be able to correct a few spelling errors. There are a few run-on sentences, but all of us have had those. Go back and read what you wrote, I believe you will find them. smile

      Overall great job! I am looking forward to reading more of the story. smile

  2. Silent Sinner profile image57
    Silent Sinnerposted 6 years ago

    Thank you for the advice. I have been meaning to go and reread it .I guess I probably should . lol

 
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