Critique Please

  1. KarenCreftor profile image87
    KarenCreftorposted 6 years ago

    I've just posted my first 2 hubs and would love to know if I'm going along the right lines so all critiques welcome!

    Thanks
    ~Kaz x

    http://karencreftor.hubpages.com/

    1. AshtonFirefly profile image80
      AshtonFireflyposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Just read both your hubs...I'm a newbie here too! smile Hi!
      Just wanted to tell you I enjoyed them both. The one about chronic illness....great information! Ran into a few run-on sentences which confused me just a little, but not really much smile Really liked your hub about the 80/20 rule...great job but don't be afraid to elaborate even more...sell your ideas...after reading your hub, I was interested in more details and examples on how this would work...overall, great job! Hope to see more hubs smile

 
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