I think you should rewrite this paragraph
"I believe that a definite part of delivering memorable customer service is product knowledge, and Hal definitely delivered on this with his outstanding recommendation that day. Hal, not only delivered on providing a great quality product, but he delivered on outstanding coffeehouse sociability with his friendly atmosphere he provides at the Daily Grind." Try and vary your words more.
Other than that and a couple of grammatical errors it is well written.
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