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Feedback on "Parents Guide to Buying Video Games" Please

  1. Gatti profile image77
    Gattiposted 5 years ago

    Hello,
    I was wondering if I could get feedback on my latest hub "Parents Guide to Buying Video Games"

    You can go to the hub here: http://gatti.hubpages.com/hub/Parents-G … Games?done

    Thank you for all feedback.

    1. brittanytodd profile image90
      brittanytoddposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      This is a great hub that describes the different types of video games, but I don't think that it is necessarily "a parent's guide."  Maybe you should change the title?  I thought a parent's guide would have a rating system and specific games with a description of their violence/maturity level. 

      Three notes:

      If you don't change the title, you need to put an apostrophe in "parent's".

      Also, you misspelled "vehicle" as "vehical" in the driving games section.

      I think a list of the most popular games in each section (like to the right of the section) would be great for this hub.  If you don't change the title, however, you could put the most popular games in a section to the right also, but sort them by age limit.

      Great hub, just rethink that title!  Keep up the great work!

      1. Gatti profile image77
        Gattiposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        I renamed the hub fixed the type and changed the example game areas to most popular game areas tell me what you think now.

        1. brittanytodd profile image90
          brittanytoddposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          Looks great!  Glad I could help smile

          1. Gatti profile image77
            Gattiposted 5 years ago in reply to this

            Thank you for your help

 
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