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Inspirational Hub Needs Review!

  1. MissFrost profile image59
    MissFrostposted 5 years ago

    I’m new to Hubpages and trying to find my groove. I’m just writing whatever comes to mind. Do you think this hub is well written? Is there anything that I should modify? I’m sure this Hub won’t get too much traffic but I still wanted to write it. Thanks for your time!!!

    http://missfrost.hubpages.com/hub/Lesso … d-From-Opa

    1. brittanytodd profile image93
      brittanytoddposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      This looks great!  What are you trying to do on HP?  If you are trying to gain traffic to your hub, I would consider writing an introduction that describes what your hub is about.

      Also, I noticed that your images are not cited correctly.  Here's a great hub to help you with using images legally: http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/legal-image-use

      Good work!  Keep it up.

      1. MissFrost profile image59
        MissFrostposted 5 years agoin reply to this

        To answer your question, I guess I'm on HP for fun! I'll def. think about what you said about the introduction! Thanks for helping me with my site my images!

        1. brittanytodd profile image93
          brittanytoddposted 5 years agoin reply to this

          No problem.  If you're on it for fun, then that is just fine how it is.  I voted it up too.

  2. seanorjohn profile image80
    seanorjohnposted 5 years ago

    I thought your hub was a wonderful tribute to your Grandfather. Because it has a universal message Hubpages will not mark it as over personal. If you want more adverts appearing early on then you could move the opening pictures to the end of the hub. But in truth I am a hopeless amateur in the arts of SEO. Good luck and congrats on  writing such an inspirational hub.

    1. MissFrost profile image59
      MissFrostposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Seanorjohn!

 
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